Kaiden (concept)

Vision-Overall this was well planned and well executed though I think the dark edges effect detracts a little, albeit not significantly.

Originality-as this is a concept sketch and not a finished product I have to reserve judgement at first glance nothing really stands out about what kind of vibe this character gives me. But it shows promise

Technique-Only the resolution is lacking but that's more to do with what you used to present or upload this. The pencil work is spot on with regards to proportion, texture and shading.

Impact-Again this is a concept sketch, but because of the technique and vision in creating this are definitely above average.